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STAR WARS: THE FORCE AWAKENS - SPOILER REVIEW!
After waiting 10 years for a new Star Wars movie, JJ has taken over and built up massive hype to revive the franchise. Including new visuals, stories, and characters, The Force Awakens does well...but sometimes not every moviegoer has the same critically praising opinions as critics and other fanboys of Star Wars.
Story:
Several years after the events of Return of the Jedi, Luke Skywalker has gone missing and a new empire known as the First Order rises from the original Empire after its defeat, vowing to not stop until every Jedi is dead.
In the beginning, we see Rebel Resistance pilot Poe Dameron meeting with a companion that gives him a small device that poses significance of searching for any of the remaining Jedi. It isn’t until The First Order creates an ambush and leader Kylo Ren kidnaps the pilot. One of the Stormtroopers, however – cannot bear the trauma and chaos The First Order delivers, and decides to escape the reign of the dark side.
Along the way is a girl Rey
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Pulled Deep Into The Abyss.
A dark blue horizon was the first thing the man set his eyes on. He was pulled beneath this world – the world of clarity. The feeling was shallow, but the surroundings were deep.
Underwater, he felt immune. Immune from the dangers of oxygen deprivation. The fears were washed away by the tranquility that grappled onto the man. He couldn’t be harmed.
But it would only be a matter of time before he realized that he wasn’t being pulled into heaven – he was being pulled into hell.
It all came back to him – the troubles of his past.
That house he used to build for himself – his own dream house that once was luxurious now turned into a wasteland. He wasn’t able to return to his own personal creation, because of the terrible next-door neighbors.
The love of his life wasn’t what he expected it to be. He wasn’t a jock, but he wasn’t a geek. Just a typical human being who is his own Prince Charming. And that Prince Charming happened to r
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50 Years of Sleep
Well, it's been 50 years since I lived inside this machine - a model resembling an animal that must have been created by a mysterious individual.
Little do I know, that somewhere in the abyss, it's not home to me. 
All I see is shadows that obscure my surroundings, and there is no light, but only a heart that beats. I can't see my own body, and there is not enough truth to this mystery.
I struggle against my will to bat my sight awake, but my mind has not enough willpower. So, I slowly put my mind into the focus of my eyes, and put in my energy.
"Open thy eyes. Open the curtains to your universe."
With just enough energy in my mind, a series of auroras shines before my eyes. 
Where have I been all along? What, during my sleep, have I missed?
What do the lights want with my corpse that moistens and awakens? Who is to be thanked for emerging from darkness?
With only one word in mind, see the truth in I. 
Earth.
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Night.
Bitter be bitter,
Are you hither? 
For endless roads and hills
Thou cannot see the river.
The day is black, the tempers have silenced
Without thy warnings, the crowds are violent.
But emerged from underneath, left us in shock
The tremors from the sea, only one would hark
While the rest of us would meet our fates
And think to the gods we are corrupted, wait
But out the gate we are now disgraced.
Into oblivion, we take a trip
Down to where we see a ship
Belonging to one of the most holiest
And most respected men that walked this Earth
Years before the curse had awakened from birth.
What thy see remains obscure
But the presence of the ghost 
Keeps the flocks insecure 
Madness becomes our host
And we're now poisoned at most.
To the surface we scramble
We run from those who ramble
Like blood returning to the mind
And the dark leaving them blind
The city that sleeps now awakens to trampling. 
Now, dead I lie
Ooze and black crawl out of my eye
Coughing and falling ill
Rave
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Paths
Why do we fall?
Is it so we stumble quicker?
Why do we rise?
Is it because we are stronger?
On the trail to the plants
I see not one, but two figures stand
One is light, the other is dark.
No discrimination, but here's my situation-
All those times where I tried to fly with the flock
But it all failed when I crashed into the docks
Where I was blinded for being the one and only standing 
While I misinterpreted those who were motivating
and thought of them to be filled with greed and arrogance.
But now I learned that every picture doesn't have high definition
When I acted childish and felt too selfish.
And learned that the grass ain't always greener
So I kept thinking, "Fuck it, why did I believe it?"
Here I am, back into the virtual sinkhole
Where I had many resources but I didn't carefully use them all
In order to present my own creativity and get followers
Or do it for the passion and not to become so popular?
How many good times can make me feel all right?
How many bad times can
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Gold
Oh, how worthy!
Oh, how holy!
I can no longer bear the beauty
of how much this coin means so much to me!
All the glitter
makes me feel bitter,
but this certainly ain't litter.
I close my eyes and dream
about a river of gold downstream,
where I could look at all the bright beams
as the charm endlessly streams.
My new found wealth will never grow old
even if more worthy pots of gold
begin to unfold
and the rest that remain is sold.
Oh, the riches
without the witches
that can really hitch
to my wishes.
Oh, the wealth, 
it's what I enjoy!
It can really regain my health
and joy!
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Godzilla.
Crashing through ships out of shores,
this kind of activity has become quite a bore.
Although finding land for my own little ones is a chore
this will be an exciting journey, Nevermore.
Through the oceans, thunders, and rain
I see a fisher running from me, in vain.
But what really transcends my pain
is the one pain that I cannot contain.
Carrying a pile of transportation on my spikes,
my clamorous roar inflicts the behavior of the beings with fright,
as my first step on land becomes all strong and might,
so do my footsteps as my curiosity ignites.
While stepping through the city, watching the miniature sized men
flee from my amazingly humongous height yet again
I leave a trail of destruction that would've scared everyone until the end.
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Suddenly night arrives in time
smelling a scent that calls me to dinnertime.
As I walk the streets, my feelings become relieved,
I haven't had much fresh food to eat out in the sea.
But what really replenishes my confusion is a pile, not a d
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Star-Crossed Lovers, No More
What's real?
What's not?
What's zeal?
What's forgotten?
What's traveling over the stars
while we tremble coldly in the dark?
What's happening to our memoirs
while we stopped running afar?
Where's our kind golden parts
that exhibited ourselves as true sweethearts?
Where's our time to feel
when we try our best to heal?
What is really surreal
and what is ordeal?
O Romeo, Romeo, wherefore art thou Romeo?
I miss you, Romeo!
I've gone solo
every time my heart beats so slow
With poison flowing down my throat
I do nothing but choke
And from that choke is not a stroke
but a question that is always evoked
What is love?
What is hate?
What isn't broke?
What is at stake?
Our former hero
is finally washed ashore
Romeo, a star-crossed lover
no more.
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Halloween Movie Reviews - Part 1
WARNING: STRONG PROFANITY AND POSSIBLE SPINE CHILLING DETAILS OR SPOILERS ABOUT THE MOVIE MAY BE REVEALED. READ AT YOUR OWN RISK.
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Friday the 13th (2009) Director: Marcus Nispel, Producer: Michael Bay, Actor: Jared Padalecki.
Critics: ★ | Daily Night Critic: ★★★
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Plot: A group of young adults discover a boarded up Camp Crystal Lake, where they soon discover Jason Voorhees and his deadly intentions. (Anonymous, IMDB)
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First and foremost, I want to say that I never, ever watched plenty of slasher films. Not usually my type of horror since I always thought it focused on more killings than the story. Also, they were too gruesome for me, but I have no problem with gore in sci-fi, horror creature movies, depending on how bad it really is.
But when I first saw it over the weekend, I had very high expectations this remake wouldn't be as great as the originals, even though I don't watch the originals first, because, hey, n
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Using HTML on deviantART

Hello!

Hello and welcome to my little html tutorial. I've been working with html codes for a couple of years and I'm going to teach you what I know about using some basic html on deviantART. This won't make you a html expert or something and I'm not an expert myself but it will give just enough knowledge to make your journals, comments, news articles and other neat and lovely looking. :)
deviantART actually has FAQs about html but I still wanted to do this because they look a bit unorganized, in my opinion. Also, why would you want to look for those FAQs when you can just open this news article where you have everything in one place? :dummy:
You may already know some of these, but I hope you'll find at least something helpful in this news article.

Some basic html

:bulletorange:Bold text: <b>insert text here</b>
:pointr: Result: Example text
:pointr:This html code will work in: journal entries, group blogs, comments, artist's commen
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Here Lies the Victim
Two of me.
It’s what I see.
The older and the younger,
Side by side.
Young, full of life
Smiles the younger.
What happened?
Why did it happen?
Did I ask for it?
And now,
how can I blame myself?
My innocence taken
By force.
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Holiday Card Project 2012

It's back!  With the goal of bringing a little cheer to patients in the hospital during the holiday season, the deviantART Holiday Card Project connects deviants from around the world and applies their tremendous artistic abilities in designing and creating uplifting holiday cards.
In past years, the Project has received more than 5,000 cards sent in by more than 1,000 deviants from 50 different countries/political regions. Cards were then divvied up and distributed in-person by deviantART members to local Los Angeles, CA hospitals, with additional cards given to various hospitals in the U.S. and abroad for hospital staff members to hand out to patients.
The idea behind the Holiday Card Project is simple: do something nice for others. However, if you're looking for even more incentive, every deviant who submits a card will be given a free one-month Premium Membership to deviant
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How To Write
Abstract: an analytical approach to plotting and writing fiction upwards of 1,000 words
Acknowledgements: the potentially amazing Rachel (IfrozenspiritI) served as guinea pig to this; go and tell her to finish the product of that experiment, because you'll love it. Chris Widdison (tearstone) approached me indecently with the idea of writing a longer essay (which will still happen, and be a lot more purdy than this here thing), which would incorporate this essay in another form, amongst others. He doesn't need to read any of this, because he already knows it all.
Target audience: young, inexperienced writers, especially those that find themselves pulling off vignettes and other super-short forms with an ease, while chronically unable to produce anything with more than a handful of scenes and more than 1,000 words.
Structure:
Part 1: The Premise takes a look at the basic idea behind a piece
Part 2: The Story fills in some of those blanks and gives u
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A Short Guide to Brainstorming
Got nothing to write?  Stuck in the middle of a story?  Just getting your mind wrapped around a new idea?  Asking yourself, "Where do I go from here?"
Here is the two-step guide to story development.  It works every time, 100% guaranteed.  
Step one:
Ask yourself this simple question: "What if?"
Staring at a blank page?  Ask "What if . . . ?"
Stuck in the middle of a story?  Ask "What if . . . ?"
Don't know how to end your story?  Ask "What if . . . ?"
Don't think your story is going in quite the right direction?  Ask "What if . . .?"
Step two:
Ask yourself this second simple question: "Why?"
What if aliens invaded our planet?
Why?
What if the antagonist is obsessed with redheaded women?
Why?
What if the good guy dies in the end?
Why?
What if the protagonist lies to his love interest instead of telling her the thing he desperately wants to get out?
Why?
Here's the point:
Absolutely anything is possible in the world o
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How to Improve Your Writing Style
While I’ve written articles about writing style in the past, they were designed mostly to define what style is and didn’t provide much help for improvement. This article contains some practical tips I’ve discovered that will actually help you improve your style and hopefully provide a foundation for why good style matters. I believe good style is important for many reasons, but mostly because I want my readers to feel like the time they spent with my story was worthwhile, pleasant, and maybe even a little enlightening.
“All readers come to fiction as willing accomplices to your lies. Such is the basic goodwill contract made the moment we pick up a work of fiction.” – Steve Almond 
“Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.” – Kurt Vonnegut 
1) Be clear. 
“To be clear is the first duty of a writer; to charm and to please are graces to be acquired later
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8 Quick Tips for Writing Dialogue
1) Dialogue in fiction is nothing like how people talk in real life. It’s fine to use “as heard in real-life” phrasing, but real-life dialogue is often meaningless. Ideally, every word of dialogue in fiction should serve a purpose and progress the plot or character development. If it has more than one meaning (subtext), all the better.
2) Start the conversation late and exit early. No one wants to read small talk, hellos, or goodbyes unless they add meaning to the story … which is almost never.
3) No info dumping in dialogue, please. Only put quotation marks around what you can actually envision the character saying in that particular scene. What you want your readers to know has nothing to do with what a character actually says. After all, that’s why stories have narration.
4) Be unexpected and don’t fill dialogue with cliches. If readers can predict what the next charac
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How to Develop Story Conflict
Conflict is the central element of any story. It’s what keeps us on the edge of our seats and turning page after page until 3:00am. Or, as Wikipedia puts it, narrative conflict is “an inherent incompatibility between the objectives of two or more characters or forces. Conflict creates tension and interest in a story by adding doubt as to the outcome.”
So how do you create this all-important conflict in your stories? Well, it all starts in the development process. There are three basic steps to developing conflict, and they follow a specific logical progression because, ultimately, developing a good story is an exercise in logic. So let’s jump right in.
Step 1) Scope
The first step is drawing the boundaries of your story’s scope. That might seem like a weird place to start, but scope will determine nearly every other aspect of your story.
The key here is to determine what within the world of your story is out of balance.
This imbalan
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C'est la vie
My God!
Before us,
I didn't know
if you would
Like me.
The effect you have on me...
Baby, I'm floatin' on air.
As long as you're here,
I'm always loving,
always crushing.
But, no.
I regret nothing.
This is Love.
C'est la vie.
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Perfection
Perfection-
is within our reach
And I can't stand it-
Ima 'bout to breach
From beneath this skin-
of disconnect
While you see heaven
I'm just a reck.
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8 Players. 12 Hours. 10,000 Robots. Hell breaks loose in the first chapter of: 12 Hours - The Survival Stream of ToonTown. 

www.fanfiction.net/s/12282215/…
I have moved to my new account: TheGeminianIntrovert - for future stories and more. 

Plus, I am now active in the following sections: 

- Fanfiction (GeminiLoneWolfJohn)
- YouTube (Kid Gemini) 
- ImagineCasting (MovieCriticGamer)
- Listal (MovieCriticGamer)

I have been dead from this account for almost a year-and-a-half. I will post a journal regarding my transition into different activities outside of DeviantArt. 

- J 

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Oh My God, how long have I been gone? :O

It's good to be back on DA, seeing that I can submit a couple of pictures or so. :)

But now that I'm back (I'm currently in Brazil), I'll be doing 8 facts based on my first and original OC that I used for RPs, John. (Not the real me, haha) 

1. I'm heavily influenced by superheroes and various types of movies, television shows, and stories. My idea for the OC came from Superman (watching Man of Steel in previews) and The Darkest Hour (Alien invasion movie) when it involved my character getting attack by extraterrestrials with the ability to dissolve any living organism that stands in their way, whilst John is given powers such as super strength, flight, and telekinesis to fight back against his adversaries. I originally had named him Anon (Anonymous), to give him more of a mysterious aura, but because of my interest in the new Superman movie at the time, I decided between John or Anon to develop my character. I went with John, seeing how some of the old DA users I used to talk with had some of their real names or other names given to the OCs. 

2. John was suppose to be a character who was more caring, loving, but with a dangerous dark side if pushed the wrong way or betrayed. I felt this was way too cliched, and I went on to try different variations of personality for the character. I either wanted him to be soft-spoken with an alien inside of the machine, a simian with a human's consciousness transferred inside, or a lab experiment gone wrong. Eventually, I went along with the third option, but felt rushed to get people to read the story. Last year, I planned on a dark but gritty approach to my OC, but was scrapped due to major writer's block. 

3. John was the only OC that I stuck with despite several creations (Liam, Andrew, Holloway, Josh the Hedgehog, Caleb, etc.) as I wanted to get him more involved with other types of fandoms, which eventually backfired. This later taught me a valuable lesson in characters that if the OC that I use too much is placed in many people's stories, it really would ruin the character unless something different could take place. 

4. I created a clone of my OC (Samayo) which was suppose to resemble John's new form after the war in EiliganReviewz's SRLS timeline. Samayo was John, but completely different in a way that his memory was completely erased in order to prevent killing those he cares about (result of PTSD from sacrifice and resurrection). I thought the idea worked well, but the appearance became too obvious to most of my watchers, and later scrapped it in order to think of something different. 

5. I enjoyed using this character for the majority of RPs (SRLS, SRMTHFG, and Sonic Crossovers) and I was really looking forward to bringing a significant transition from the character to build on more stories that would develop him a little more into a compelling character. Unfortunately, I lost interest in the SRMTHFG fandom and today I usually don't get involved with fandoms unless the concept and story bring my attention. 

6. Will we ever see him again? Maybe. The possibilities of a return can happen in the future...unless a new soul comes along and takes his place. :)

I can't really think of anything else beyond 8 facts, but I guess I could add in a little trivia. :)

7. After seeing The-Angel-Deoden's new OC Liana appear on her page, I had the idea of a Ying/Yang relationship (Dark and Light) where my OC seemingly falls in love wit someone on  the dark side, bringing hope to someone with morals of evil and destruction to have a heart and follow the right path to good. 

8. I really had a blast forming the bond between EiliganReviewz's OC Jak and my OC John. The bond was a uncle/nephew relationship because of my character being bonded with Antauri as a brother (Jak's father in SRLS) but sometimes it felt more like best friend and best friend or brother and brother. :D

That's all I'm going to do for the 8 facts, but if there comes a time where I can bring my OC back in a different manner, I'd be happy to do it for my old friends and watchers on here. 

Thank you very much for reading this journal and check out my other account (TheGeminianIntrovert) as I will be writing original stories that I have developed during my time off of DA (2015 and 2016). 

Stay tuned, and Love, light, and warmth to my old friends and acquaintances. :)
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:woohoo: :party: :iconcakelickplz: !!! HAPPY BIRTHDAY !!! :iconcakelickplz: :party: :woohoo:

On behalf of the birthdays team, I sincerely apologize that your greeting has arrived late this year.

We hope you had an awesome day with lots of birthday fun, gifts, happiness and most definitely, lots of cake! Here's to another year!

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Happy birthday! :D
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Happy Birthday (3) MenInASuitcase Lily Wishing a Happy Birthday Happy Birthday Sailor-Pikmin! Birthday Cake (1)   Happy Birthday Melmo 
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Happy Birthday. ^.^ :cake: :party:
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Have some free Art too, for your Special Day :) (Smile)
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Your a inspiration 😇
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JohnTheRebelLeader Featured By Owner Jan 9, 2017  Hobbyist Artist
Thank you! Which one of my entries inspired you?
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Almost all of it 😊
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Nice! I moved to a different account - "TheGeminianIntrovert" and I'll be posting a journal soon regarding my absence and so forth. :)
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