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STAR WARS: THE FORCE AWAKENS - SPOILER REVIEW!After waiting 10 years for a new Star Wars movie, JJ has taken over and built up massive hype to revive the franchise. Including new visuals, stories, and characters, The Force Awakens does well...but sometimes not every moviegoer has the same critically praising opinions as critics and other fanboys of Star Wars.STAR WARS: THE FORCE AWAKENS - SPOILER REVIEW! by JohnTheRebelLeader
Several years after the events of Return of the Jedi, Luke Skywalker has gone missing and a new empire known as the First Order rises from the original Empire after its defeat, vowing to not stop until every Jedi is dead.
In the beginning, we see Rebel Resistance pilot Poe Dameron meeting with a companion that gives him a small device that poses significance of searching for any of the remaining Jedi. It isn’t until The First Order creates an ambush and leader Kylo Ren kidnaps the pilot. One of the Stormtroopers, however – cannot bear the trauma and chaos The First Order delivers, and decides to escape the reign of the dark side.
Along the way is a girl Rey
Pulled Deep Into The Abyss.A dark blue horizon was the first thing the man set his eyes on. He was pulled beneath this world – the world of clarity. The feeling was shallow, but the surroundings were deep.Pulled Deep Into The Abyss. by JohnTheRebelLeader
Underwater, he felt immune. Immune from the dangers of oxygen deprivation. The fears were washed away by the tranquility that grappled onto the man. He couldn’t be harmed.
But it would only be a matter of time before he realized that he wasn’t being pulled into heaven – he was being pulled into hell.
It all came back to him – the troubles of his past.
That house he used to build for himself – his own dream house that once was luxurious now turned into a wasteland. He wasn’t able to return to his own personal creation, because of the terrible next-door neighbors.
The love of his life wasn’t what he expected it to be. He wasn’t a jock, but he wasn’t a geek. Just a typical human being who is his own Prince Charming. And that Prince Charming happened to r
50 Years of SleepWell, it's been 50 years since I lived inside this machine - a model resembling an animal that must have been created by a mysterious individual.50 Years of Sleep by JohnTheRebelLeader
Little do I know, that somewhere in the abyss, it's not home to me.
All I see is shadows that obscure my surroundings, and there is no light, but only a heart that beats. I can't see my own body, and there is not enough truth to this mystery.
I struggle against my will to bat my sight awake, but my mind has not enough willpower. So, I slowly put my mind into the focus of my eyes, and put in my energy.
"Open thy eyes. Open the curtains to your universe."
With just enough energy in my mind, a series of auroras shines before my eyes.
Where have I been all along? What, during my sleep, have I missed?
What do the lights want with my corpse that moistens and awakens? Who is to be thanked for emerging from darkness?
With only one word in mind, see the truth in I.
Night.Bitter be bitter,Night. by JohnTheRebelLeader
Are you hither?
For endless roads and hills
Thou cannot see the river.
The day is black, the tempers have silenced
Without thy warnings, the crowds are violent.
But emerged from underneath, left us in shock
The tremors from the sea, only one would hark
While the rest of us would meet our fates
And think to the gods we are corrupted, wait
But out the gate we are now disgraced.
Into oblivion, we take a trip
Down to where we see a ship
Belonging to one of the most holiest
And most respected men that walked this Earth
Years before the curse had awakened from birth.
What thy see remains obscure
But the presence of the ghost
Keeps the flocks insecure
Madness becomes our host
And we're now poisoned at most.
To the surface we scramble
We run from those who ramble
Like blood returning to the mind
And the dark leaving them blind
The city that sleeps now awakens to trampling.
Now, dead I lie
Ooze and black crawl out of my eye
Coughing and falling ill
How To WriteAbstract: an analytical approach to plotting and writing fiction upwards of 1,000 wordsHow To Write by danielzklein
Acknowledgements: the potentially amazing Rachel (IfrozenspiritI) served as guinea pig to this; go and tell her to finish the product of that experiment, because you'll love it. Chris Widdison (tearstone) approached me indecently with the idea of writing a longer essay (which will still happen, and be a lot more purdy than this here thing), which would incorporate this essay in another form, amongst others. He doesn't need to read any of this, because he already knows it all.
Target audience: young, inexperienced writers, especially those that find themselves pulling off vignettes and other super-short forms with an ease, while chronically unable to produce anything with more than a handful of scenes and more than 1,000 words.
Part 1: The Premise takes a look at the basic idea behind a piece
Part 2: The Story fills in some of those blanks and gives u
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