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50 Years of SleepWell, it's been 50 years since I lived inside this machine - a model resembling an animal that must have been created by a mysterious individual.50 Years of Sleep by JohnTheRebelLeader
Little do I know, that somewhere in the abyss, it's not home to me.
All I see is shadows that obscure my surroundings, and there is no light, but only a heart that beats. I can't see my own body, and there is not enough truth to this mystery.
I struggle against my will to bat my sight awake, but my mind has not enough willpower. So, I slowly put my mind into the focus of my eyes, and put in my energy.
"Open thy eyes. Open the curtains to your universe."
With just enough energy in my mind, a series of auroras shines before my eyes.
Where have I been all along? What, during my sleep, have I missed?
What do the lights want with my corpse that moistens and awakens? Who is to be thanked for emerging from darkness?
With only one word in mind, see the truth in I.
Night.Bitter be bitter,Night. by JohnTheRebelLeader
Are you hither?
For endless roads and hills
Thou cannot see the river.
The day is black, the tempers have silenced
Without thy warnings, the crowds are violent.
But emerged from underneath, left us in shock
The tremors from the sea, only one would hark
While the rest of us would meet our fates
And think to the gods we are corrupted, wait
But out the gate we are now disgraced.
Into oblivion, we take a trip
Down to where we see a ship
Belonging to one of the most holiest
And most respected men that walked this Earth
Years before the curse had awakened from birth.
What thy see remains obscure
But the presence of the ghost
Keeps the flocks insecure
Madness becomes our host
And we're now poisoned at most.
To the surface we scramble
We run from those who ramble
Like blood returning to the mind
And the dark leaving them blind
The city that sleeps now awakens to trampling.
Now, dead I lie
Ooze and black crawl out of my eye
Coughing and falling ill
PathsWhy do we fall?Paths by JohnTheRebelLeader
Is it so we stumble quicker?
Why do we rise?
Is it because we are stronger?
On the trail to the plants
I see not one, but two figures stand
One is light, the other is dark.
No discrimination, but here's my situation-
All those times where I tried to fly with the flock
But it all failed when I crashed into the docks
Where I was blinded for being the one and only standing
While I misinterpreted those who were motivating
and thought of them to be filled with greed and arrogance.
But now I learned that every picture doesn't have high definition
When I acted childish and felt too selfish.
And learned that the grass ain't always greener
So I kept thinking, "Fuck it, why did I believe it?"
Here I am, back into the virtual sinkhole
Where I had many resources but I didn't carefully use them all
In order to present my own creativity and get followers
Or do it for the passion and not to become so popular?
How many good times can make me feel all right?
How many bad times can
How To WriteAbstract: an analytical approach to plotting and writing fiction upwards of 1,000 wordsHow To Write by danielzklein
Acknowledgements: the potentially amazing Rachel (IfrozenspiritI) served as guinea pig to this; go and tell her to finish the product of that experiment, because you'll love it. Chris Widdison (tearstone) approached me indecently with the idea of writing a longer essay (which will still happen, and be a lot more purdy than this here thing), which would incorporate this essay in another form, amongst others. He doesn't need to read any of this, because he already knows it all.
Target audience: young, inexperienced writers, especially those that find themselves pulling off vignettes and other super-short forms with an ease, while chronically unable to produce anything with more than a handful of scenes and more than 1,000 words.
Part 1: The Premise takes a look at the basic idea behind a piece
Part 2: The Story fills in some of those blanks and gives u
A Short Guide to BrainstormingA Short Guide to Brainstorming by illuminara
Got nothing to write? Stuck in the middle of a story? Just getting your mind wrapped around a new idea? Asking yourself, "Where do I go from here?"
Here is the two-step guide to story development. It works every time, 100% guaranteed.
Ask yourself this simple question: "What if?"
Staring at a blank page? Ask "What if . . . ?"
Stuck in the middle of a story? Ask "What if . . . ?"
Don't know how to end your story? Ask "What if . . . ?"
Don't think your story is going in quite the right direction? Ask "What if . . .?"
Ask yourself this second simple question: "Why?"
What if aliens invaded our planet?
What if the antagonist is obsessed with redheaded women?
What if the good guy dies in the end?
What if the protagonist lies to his love interest instead of telling her the thing he desperately wants to get out?
Here's the point:
Absolutely anything is possible in the world o
How to Improve Your Writing StyleHow to Improve Your Writing Style by illuminara
While I’ve written articles about writing style in the past, they were designed mostly to define what style is and didn’t provide much help for improvement. This article contains some practical tips I’ve discovered that will actually help you improve your style and hopefully provide a foundation for why good style matters. I believe good style is important for many reasons, but mostly because I want my readers to feel like the time they spent with my story was worthwhile, pleasant, and maybe even a little enlightening.
“All readers come to fiction as willing accomplices to your lies. Such is the basic goodwill contract made the moment we pick up a work of fiction.” – Steve Almond
“Use the time of a total stranger in such a way that he or she will not feel the time was wasted.” – Kurt Vonnegut
1) Be clear.
“To be clear is the first duty of a writer; to charm and to please are graces to be acquired later
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